This is a rough draft of the video documentary. Everyone please leave feedback if theres anything that you think should be edited, added, or removed. If you have any suggestions for text information that should be on the slides or different background music let me know. I wont be at school Monday, comment any feedback before then because I wont have time to work on this Monday. When we present we can play the final copy of the documentary off our blog and include a blog based presentation if we don't have enough statistics/information from the video.
Saturday, November 10, 2012
Group Video Project
This is a rough draft of the video documentary. Everyone please leave feedback if theres anything that you think should be edited, added, or removed. If you have any suggestions for text information that should be on the slides or different background music let me know. I wont be at school Monday, comment any feedback before then because I wont have time to work on this Monday. When we present we can play the final copy of the documentary off our blog and include a blog based presentation if we don't have enough statistics/information from the video.
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- The first interview is probably unnecessary because she didn't have a phone as well as the third.
ReplyDelete- Maybe try to chop up the interviews so we don't have to watch people search for things on their phones, just show that they used them then cut to their answers. Or maybe group the same questions together. Maybe even just show that they used their phones, the answers aren't all that important anyway.
- I liked the rewind after the first set of interviews!
- For the second set of interviews, they look good but it may be better to combine all the answers to the same questions rather than ask them over and over
- Additionally I think some more statistics should be added from outside of Groves (like from published articles etc.) I'm going to work on the paper today so you can use some from there, or use the links from the research blog post.
- Also Renee's name is misspelled in the credits.
PLEASE look at the essay, I did what I could but we still need a works cited page and everyone needs to contribute whether it be adding/deleting a sentence or revising. When it you are satisfied, put your name at the top with a * before it (ie. *Laura) so I will know when I can print it and have finally be done with it. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteOh and that means everyone, I just realized it may look like I'm only talking to Serena because this is her post, but I'm talking to the entire group.
ReplyDelete**Serena, I know you put a lot of effort and time into the video but if you could just look over the paper as well that would be awesome.
I don't want to turn it in and have anyone upset because they feel like the rest group screwed it up. This is a group effort.
add background music during parts with texts to make it more entertaining to watch, and a fitting song could be payphone by maroon 5. Also type the question and show the answers to it back to back like one persons answer then anothers and so on and so forth.
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